What could the author add to better clarify the central idea

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Answer 1

Answer: try and add more emotions and dialogue into the text

Explanation:


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100 POINTS AND BRAINLIEST!!!!! PLEASE HELP!!!

CHAPTER II—THE SHE-WOLF, an excerpt
From White Fang
By Jack London

Breakfast eaten and the slim camp-outfit lashed to the sled, the men turned their backs on the cheery fire and launched out into the darkness. At once began to rise the cries that were fiercely sad—cries that called through the darkness and cold to one another and answered back. Conversation ceased. Daylight came at nine o'clock. At midday the sky to the south warmed to rose-colour, and marked where the bulge of the earth intervened between the meridian sun and the northern world. But the rose-colour swiftly faded. The grey light of day that remained lasted until three o'clock, when it, too, faded, and the pall of the Arctic night descended upon the lone and silent land.

As darkness came on, the hunting-cries to right and left and rear drew closer—so close that more than once they sent surges of fear through the toiling dogs, throwing them into short-lived panics.

At the conclusion of one such panic, when he and Henry had got the dogs back in the traces, Bill said:

"I wisht they'd strike game somewheres, an' go away an' leave us alone."

"They do get on the nerves horrible," Henry sympathized.

They spoke no more until camp was made.


What aspects of the developing story would you emphasize in a summary of this section of the text? Why would you emphasize them? Please respond in three to five complete sentences.

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Answer:

The grey light of day that remained lasted until three o'clock, when it, too, faded,...

As described in this paragraph, the main characters experience a difficult situation which is present by tension building throughout the paragraph. After mentioning of a tense situation, where fiercely sad cries were heard, the author mentiones a rising sun of a warm rose-colour which sounds as a hope arising, but immediately after that there is a mention of ill-omened grey light. Precisely this contrast between warm rose and grey colour is a represantation of a conflict which is experienced throughout the text.

Explanation:

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In which sentence is the dash used correctly?


A. The army investigated—and the findings—were that the crash was an accident.

B. The doctor worked hard—despite the raging battle—to save the wounded.

C. The soldier felt relieved and proud—when he saved three of his comrades.

D. The soldier felt—guilty because she recovered while others did not.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Which of the following sentences is an example of a simile?
A) My father set a course directly for them.
B) For the first time in days, my father seemed happy.
C) He started the motor, wincing from the pain as he pulled the cord.
D) ...the shoreline looked to me to be as far away as the moon.
please help ill give brainiest this is a time test

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Answer:

c

Explanation:  compairing the wining to the pain

My sister and I happily pack for camping trip while our dad was at the store. Which revision bury the sentence by beginning it with an adverb?

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Answer:

Me and my sister

Explanation:

The reason is because you want to say yourself first

Answer:

While our dad was at the store, my sister and I happily packed for a camping trip.

which phrase from the sentence contains a gerund playing guitar has been a dream for me since my first camping trip where we sat around the campfire and sang songs while my dad strummed his guitar A around the campfire B while my dad strummed his guitar C since my first camping trip D playing guitar has been a dream

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Answer:

playing guitar has been a dream

Explanation:

any verb that isn't a main verb and ends with -ing is a gerund

Answer:

playing guitar has been a dream

Explanation:

The alliteration in "How statue-like I see thee stand" most strongly suggests the idea of A beauty. B hardness. C patience. D stillness.

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Answer:

The answer is A.

Mistake:

The only problme that is not an alliteration. An Allliteration is when the same sound repeets in a sentence. For an explale ¨She sells sea shells on the sea shore.¨

Reason the anwer A.

The staue is the Noun, but why is it A? Easy The person who is saying they like it. The other anwser have no part here.

Answer:

Stillness because it is comparing her to a statue

Read the two excerpts from The Call of the Wild.

The wolf whirled about, pivoting on his hind legs after the fashion of Joe and of all cornered husky dogs, snarling and bristling, clipping his teeth together in a continuous and rapid succession of snaps.

***

For the better part of an hour the wild brother ran by his side, whining softly.

Which statement is true?

The wolf is static because he changes from worried to excited.
The wolf is static because he remains the same in both situations.
The wolf is dynamic because he remains the same in both situations.
The wolf is dynamic because he changes from frightened to comfortable.

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Answer:

C is the correct answer

C hope this helps :)

One day a monkey went to the nest of his Goose and found there an egg all yellow and glittering. When he took it up it was as heavy as lead and he was going to throw it away, because he thought a trick had been played upon him. But, on second thought, he took it home and soon found to his delight that it was an egg of pure gold. Every morning the same thing occurred, and he soon became rich by selling
his eggs. As he grew rich he grew greedy; and thinking to get at once all the gold the Goose could give, he killed it and opened it only to find nothing.
What is the moral of the story

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I'm assuming this is just a twist of the Goose and the golden egg story, but the moral is "Those who have plenty want more and so lose all they have."

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the moral of the story is to never be greedy because end of the day you will always have nothing

I need some ideas. I need to write a short story about why people feel ashamed to be part of the LGBTQ+ community for english. Needs to be between 500-1000 words, or just give me idea on how I should start or something. Will mark brainliest.

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Answer:

I cant give you the whole thing but an idea

Explanation:

People are ashamed to be part of the LGBTQ+ community because in some countries its against the law, its against some religions for example Christianity. Some people don't have accepting family and might be kicked out of the house for being part of the LGBTQ+ community

Answer:

fear of rejection, internalized homo/transphobia, and illegalization of homosexuality/transgenderism in certain countries are all good talking points

Explanation:

i'm sure that the third point is kind of obvious; if someone were to be openly lgbtq+ in a state were they aren't legally allowed to be proud, they could be imprisioned or killed.

though it may not be illegal worldwide, that doesn't mean that everyone who lives somewhere where it's legal to be lgbtq+ is accepting. people may be scared of getting rejected upon coming out. this could be losing friendships/romantic partners, getting kicked out by one's family, or becoming ostracized by society.

when one is in an environment that teaches them that it isn't okay to be lgbtq+, they are not going to feel happy with themself upon the realization that they may be gay/trans. they may have been taught at a young age that lgbtq+ people are gross or wrong in someway, making them refuse to accept that not only they are lgbtq+, but that is an okay thing to be.

She got soaked walking home in the rain yesterday because her umbrella was in her gym locker.

Which part of this sentence is a clause?

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Answer:

" She got soaked walking" is the clause.

Explanation:

60 POINTS Is perseverance a choice? Is it inherent? Where does it come from? What makes some people able to persevere more than others? Create a product that explains your thinking.

Please help I’ll give you the brainliest answer :)

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Explanation:

Everyone has the choice to use their perseverance. Keep trying and never give up! Perseverance isn't something that you can just give away. You have to believe in yourself and everything will work out. It helps you make it through tough times! Some people have more perseverance than others because they believe in themselves while others rely on other people. Hope this helps!

Answer:

1. perseverance is not a choice

2. Perseverance is all around us and also inherent within each one of us.

3. Perseverance separates the winners from the losers in both sports and life. the same rush of dopamine when it comes to primal things like dating

4.Some People Have a Stronger Belief System Whether it's a strong belief in a higher power or a strong belief in yourself, having belief is critical for perseverance.

Which definition best matches the meaning of cavalier as it is used in the sentence? A. definition 1 B. definition 2 C. definition 3 D. definition 4

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Hello. You did not enter the sentence that this question refers to, which makes it impossible for me to answer it accurately, but stop helping, I will show you the possible meanings that the word "cavalier" can have. Thus, you can reread the sentence where that word is inserted, replacing it with the meanings and seeing which of the meanings allows the sentence to make sense.

The word "cavalier" can take on the meaning of "knight," that is, a soldier who exercises his duties on a horse. In addition, you can refer to a man with courteous and charming behavior, just as you can refer to an arrogant, mannerless, ignorant and brute person.

Answer: Where is the sentenced, we cant help if we don't have it so yea.

Suggested Time Allotment: 10 minutes
Thinking and Acting Ahead
1. Copy the table below on a clean sheet of paper/bond paper.
2. Think of three situations that you can possibly encounter in life. Then think about
what can go wrong in every situation you provided. Finally, write about possible
preventions that you can do in order to avoid what can go wrong.
Situation What Can Go Wrong Prevention
1.
2.
3.

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1. At the grocery store you could leave your wallet in the car. Before getting out if your car, you could’ve checked for all of the necessary belongings.
2. When you take your dog out it could run away because you where talking to your neighbor. You could’ve prevented this by not being distracted.
3. When going for a walk you cross the street. You didn’t look both ways and got hit by a car. This could’ve been avoided by checking your surroundings and looking both ways.

This statement is
Read the statement about Swift's "A Modest Proposal."
Swift's skillful and abundant use of false premises to
develop his argument was the most effective way to
signal that he was writing a satire.
objective because it is influenced by feelings or
opinions
objective because it is not influenced by feelings or
opinions
subjective because it is influenced by feelings or
opinions
subjective because it is not influenced by feelings or
opinions

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Answer:

✔️C. subjective because it is influenced by feelings or opinions

Explanation:

The statement "Swift's skillful and abundant use of false premises to develop his argument was the most effective way to signal that he was writing a satire." is subjective because it is influenced by feelings or opinions.

Subjective statements are not factual and are expressions of one's opinion, belief, or personal preference. It actually reflects the perspective of the writer or speaker and cannot be verified using concrete facts.

The above statement only gives the writer's opinion and not the fact.

Has anyone read any of these stories
• “The Oasis: Africa”
• “The Interlopers”
• “The Black Cat”
• “The Final Assault”
• “The Dream Comes True”
• “Nameless Tennessee”
• “August Heat”
• “Water Never Hurt a Man”
• “Marigolds”
• “The Most Dangerous Game”
• “A Horseman in the Sky”
If so i need your help with an assignment plz

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I haven’t but if there’s a certain book you need me to read to help you I don’t mind

Trying out for the City Search Talent Event is fun and easy! First, check
our website to see what kind of talent we're looking for in your city. We
might need athletic boys ages 12 to 15 in Philadelphia who are taller
than 5'9" or girls ages 8 to 13 in Vancouver who can sing. Next,
download the application and fill in all of the required information. Your
parents must sign the form. Then, practice your talent and look your
best! Finally, you will perform before our judges to see if you will win a
spot on our talent team. Good luck!
Which statement best describes the author's purpose?
O A. To inform readers
about ways to become a child star
OB. To entertain readers with true stories of talent auditions
O C. To persuade children to develop their talents
O D. To explain the steps necessary to enter a contest

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Answer:

D. To explain the steps necessary to enter a contest

Explanation:

The purpose of the given text is to explain the steps necessary to enter a talent contest. It's written in an entertaining, enthusiastic way.

Option A is incorrect because it doesn't tell about multiple ways to become a child star. It focuses on one particular contest, which is just one of the ways.

Option B is incorrect because, despite being written in an entertaining way, the text doesn't contain stories of talent auditions.

Option C is incorrect because the text doesn't simply persuade children to develop their talents. There are many ways to do that without applying for a contest. Of course, they'll have to develop their talent if they want to apply, but the emphasis is not on that. The text tells us who can apply and explains all necessary steps. This is why option D is the correct one.

Answer:

D. To explain the steps necessary to enter a contest

Explanation:

What does Capulets’s reaction to Juliet’s apology tell you about him? Explain if your opinion of capulet changed from the beginning of the play to now.

Act 1V, Scene 2 From Romeo and Juliet

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He goes to behind the set and mc
He goes behind the SEC

Select the word that functions as a conjunction in the sentence. Because her hand was injured, Martina was unable to go bowling with her family.​

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Answer:

Conjuction: Because

Which of the two options is correct? Tick the correct word.
1. In spite of all my advice/advices, the young fellow took to wrong ways.
2. He gave me a great deal of trouble/troubles.
3. Houses are often made of stone/stones.
4. She gave us all the information/informations she had.
5. Do you like Shelley's poetry/poetries?
6. Five hundred/hundreds people were present there.
7. I bought three dozen/dozens apples.
8. Whose are these cattle/cattles?
9. Vermin/Vermins are harmful to plants.
10. There are many different people/peoples in Europe.
please help me T-T​

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Answer:

1 Advice

2 trouble

3 stone

4 information

5 property

6 five hundred

7 dozen

8 cattle

9 vermin

10 people

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can sum1 do this for me i honestly don't want to

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Answer:

Originally Mcdonald's sold 15 cent hamburgers, but today most of there menu items are sold over $1.00.

Explanation:

Which choice BEST states the theme of the story?

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Sorry but you didn’t provide a reading

Answer:

A sorry if wrong

Explanation:

pls brainlyst if right

hiii who was your day? did you do anything in the week

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Answer:

It was good. How was yours?

Explanation:

Answer:

My day is  great and yours

Explanation:

in the week nothing interesting

very easy 6th grade poetry! pls help!

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

6. What is the literary term for the personality that your writing expresses?

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Answer:

Literary writing is usually fractional, and it makes use of figurative or symbolic language.

Explanation:

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We all add our personality to things. Think about your voice when you tell your mom that you “don’t want to do the dishes.” Your TONE is representative of your emotions and expresses your mood and in some cases, your beliefs.

The same is true of literature. The author’s TONE is the personality he/she adds to the text.

imagine that you have just taken a ride on one of the roller coaster .Write a story about your experience​

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Answer:

here it is

Explanation:

The exhilarating thrill was over, it feels weird not moving at speeds that could kill.  The dizzying feel of the loops were over, but the sensations were not.  It was terrifying, but I do not want it to stop.

hope this helps :)

How can leadership lead to success?

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Answer:

Leaders who communicate well with others can use this skill to build trust, align goals, execute strategies, and ultimately achieve the desired results.

what is the monkey's paw plot, character, conflict, POV, setting, genre, theme??

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Answer:

Explanation:

The conflict revolves around the use of the monkey's paw and the results of the wishes. Fate and chance are themes in the story, along with the flaws of man who place a too high value on material possessions. The point of view of the story is Omniscient Objective, where the reader is left to draw his own conclusions

(18) The brain is wired in such a way that the sense of smell is processed near the centers' of emotion and memory.



4. What change, if any, is needed in sentence 18?
A - Insert a comma after way
B - Change is processed to has processed
C - Change centers' to centers
D - Sentence 18 should not be changed.

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Answer:

Centers' to centers

Explanation:

Grammar

Read the passage.

The Master said: "When the father is alive, observe the son’s intent. When the father dies, observe the son’s conduct. One who does not alter his late father’s [way] for three years may be called filial.”

–The Analects, Confucius

Based on the passage, what did Confucius expect of children?

to learn from their fathers’ mistakes
to respect and obey their fathers’ wishes
to leave their families after their fathers’ death
to change their behavior after their fathers’ death

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Just took the test hope this helps

Answer:

Explanation:

b

how is racism and conformity connected?

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Explanation:

Take the black codes for example, they were made to make the black's conform to the white man's belief on how much privilege a black man should have.

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