Answer:
option B. The best critique to explain why Henrique should revise the paragraph is that he needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. In literature a commonly used device is the one of descriptive language. Basically, descriptive language is used to create a picture of the scene/character in the reader's mind. Henrique's story is laying the order of events in a logical order but it is lacking the descriptive language that will give details to those events, making the reader to engage with the story line.
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Explanation:
The most persuasive argument for why Henrique should change the paragraph is that he has to use more descriptive language to bring the narrative to life. A literary method that is frequently employed is descriptive language. Fundamentally, the purpose of descriptive language is to let the reader visualize the scenario or character in their minds. Henrique's account presents the sequence of events in a logical order, but it is devoid of the descriptive language that would provide specifics to those occurrences and encourage the reader to become involved in the plot.
Answer B
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Answer:
I think it is the second option, sorry if i am wrong
Explanation:
Please tell me what the quote below means to you.
BETTER TO LGHT
A CANDLE THAN TO
CURSE
DARKNESS
He was more depressed than ever as he drove on by himself. The late afternoon had grown hot and sultry and the country had flattened out. Deep in the sky a storm was preparing very slowly and without thunder as if it meant to drain every drop of air from the earth before it broke. There were times when Mr. Shiftlet preferred not to be alone. He felt too that a man with a car had a responsibility to others and he kept his eye out for a hitch-hiker. Occasionally he saw a sign that warned: "Drive carefully. The life you save may be your own." Which statement most accurately represents the excerpt's larger idea?
Answer:
C) Getting what you want may not make you happy.
Explanation:
Baaed on the given excerpt, Mr Shiftlet finally leaves his wife Lucy Bell, even though she is almost totally reliant on him. He craved his freedom from his wife, finally got it and then finds out that he does not want to be alone which makes him become moody inside his car.
Answer:
C) Getting what you want may not make you happy.
Explanation:
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what is the reason for the flood in the epic of gilgamesh?
what does that say about their gods?
how is this story similar to the flood story from the bible?
Answer:
The Epic of Gilgamesh has been of interest to Christians ever since its discovery in the mid-nineteenth century in the ruins of the great library at Nineveh, with its account of a universal flood with significant parallels to the Flood of Noah's day.1, 2 The rest of the Epic, which dates back to possibly third millennium B.C., contains little of value for Christians, since it concerns typical polytheistic myths associated with the pagan peoples of the time. However, some Christians have studied the ideas of creation and the afterlife presented in the Epic. Even secular scholars have recognized the parallels between the Babylonian, Phoenician, and Hebrew accounts, although not all are willing to label the connections as anything more than shared mythology.3
A Story that illustrates the
Saying a good name is better than
gold and silver".
what are the 3 verbs in "after we cleaned the yard,we went inside and ate lunch"
verbs are actions, so the three verbs would be "cleaned", "went", and "ate" :)
Answer:
Cleaned, went, and ate
Explanation:
Which revisions fix the inappropriate shift in tense in the sentence? Janelle walks into the house and found a package. Select each correct answer. Janelle walks into the house and finds a package. Janelle walked into the house and had found a package. Janelle is walking into the house and found a package. Janelle walked into the house and found a package.
Answer:
The revisions which fix the inappropriate shift in tense in the sentence are:
A. Janelle walks into the house and finds a package.
D. Janelle walked into the house and found a package.
Explanation:
Let's underline the verbs in the original sentence and identify the tenses:
Janelle walks into the house and found a package.
The first verb is "walks", and it is clearly in the simple present tense. Notice the ending -s for the third person singular. The second verb is "found", which is the past form of the verb "find". Therefore, it is in the simple past tense.
To properly revise the sentence, we must choose between one of the two tenses so that the actions described will be in accordance. Thus, we should either use only the simple present or only the simple past for both verbs. That is precisely what we have in options A and D. Option A uses the simple present "walks" and "finds", while option D uses the simple past "walked" and "found". They are, for that reason, the correct options.
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At least 5 sentences
PROMPT: What is the overall message of “Mad Woman” by Taylor Swift?
Answer using the response paragraph format:
TWO QUOTES-one from each piece. Be sure they are embedded & cited)-highlight quotes any color, highlight the citation a different color.
Example of embedded quote with citation:
In the song “Mad Woman,” Taylor Swift compares herself to a scorpion by saying they “strike to kill,” suggesting that when she gets provoked, she will fight back (Swift).
Commentary (your thoughts/opinions)-[place brackets around commentary]
Answer:
Using her newfound political voice, Taylor touches on one of the major injustices women face. Women (especially celebrities) are constantly ridiculed by men, society, and, yes, even other women. But when you dare to fight back at your aggressors, you're labelled "emotional" and "crazy." Women are expected to just lay down and take whatever is thrown at them with a smile.
Explanation:
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A job application would most likely use what type of language?
english,british,france
Next to the statements below, select R if it is restrictive, or NR if it is nonrestrictive.
The cheetah, a natural predator, is very fast. Choose...
The monkey with the long tail stole my banana. Choose...
The boy in the plastic bubble is allergic to dust. Choose...
The girl, the one with the brown hair, loves football. Choose...
Answer:
NR
R
R
NR
Explanation:
Just used this for my assignment and it was correct. The NR ones have information that can be removed without changing the meaning of the sentence, "a natural predator" and "the one with brown hair" are removable making those sentances non restrictive
Can clothing change the way a person behaves?
Write an opinion essay applying the elements and the writing process.
What are they trying to say in the poem Dante's Inferno
Answer:
BRUH where is the poem like you need to put the poem here so we can understand
“Irrepressible” in the second line means
A- incompatible
B- strong
C- oppressive
D- unrestrainable
E- unspirited
Answer:
Unrestrainable
Explanation:
We can see that this word, based off the sentence its in, is meant to tell the reader that the man is unable to be held back. "Unrestrainable" best fits this definition.
How does the description of Madame Carambeau’s house in paragraphs 1-2 contribute to the meaning of the passage?
This question is about "A Matter of Prejudice".
Answer:
The description of the house shows how old and outdated it was, just like its owner Madame Carambeau.
Explanation:
Madame Carambeau is a woman full of prejudices, old-fashioned, snobbish and intolerant. She lives within old concepts that no longer fit within today's society and this causes her to stop enjoying many good and happy things that life can offer, such as keeping a family together, having friends and keeping in touch with her own son. .
The old-fashioned way that Madame Carambeau lives can be seen even in her home, which has an outdated and somewhat old model by the standards where the story takes place.
Use have/has to describe a physical characteristic. - Utilice have/has para describir una característica física. EXAMPLE: Jose has short hair. (José tiene cabello corto) Have/has + adjetivo. Marco / blue eyes a) ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. Paula / black hair
Answer:
1. Marco has blue eyes.
2. Paula has black hair.
Other examples:
✔️Mrs. Rooney's children have yellow teeth.
✔️All the boys have strong fist.
Explanation:
With the above examples, I have been able to use "have/has" to make an example.
Also, each sentence has an adjective that is describing the noun in each sentence.
How, does the proverbial Russian definition of a hero, "He who hangs on for one minute more," apply to flawed heroes like Indiana Jones, Iron Man, and Batman? Include examples from the reading to support your conclusion. Your response must cite the articles you read in the lesson.
Imperfect heroes are those who present a history where good and evil are not simple, well-defined and well-defined concepts, but which mix, as in the real way. These heroes have problems defining what is right and what is wrong, in many moments, they have several traumas and problems, but they are able to endure their limitations and imperfections to promote what they believe is right. In other words, these characters believe that if they succeeded, in the midst of the imperfections they have to get where they are, it means that they can take it a little longer. In this sense, we can associate the Russian proverbial about the hero being "the one who can take another minute," with these characters, because they do not give up on good beings, even when it is difficult.
Answer: I couldn't find anything on this either so I hope this helps!
Flawed hero's are a more interesting take on heroic archetypes. Flawed hero's deal with the same internal challenges that we do, often in the works of bettering themselves and overcoming their human issues. This makes them relatable and more inspiring in a sense, because it's instead of seeing something that seems completely out of this world and impossible, you're seeing someone you look up to never give up on being good, even when its hard. With that, we can connect the proverbial Russian definition of. a hero, "He who hangs on for one minute more" to flawed hero's because flawed hero's represent relatability, humility, humanism, but also the strength of never giving up.
Is that first person or third personI know I'm not an ordinary ten-year-old I meansure I do ordinary thingseat ice creambikeI play ball I have an Xbox Stuff like that makes me ordinary I guess And I feel ordinary Inside But I know ordinary kids don't make other ordinary kids run away screaming in playgroundsI know ordinary kids don't get stared at wherever they
Let's just structure the excerpt a bit better. I was able to find it online:
I know I’m not an ordinary ten-year-old kid. I mean, sure, I do ordinary things. I eat ice cream. I ride my bike. I play ball. I have an XBox. Stuff like that makes me ordinary. I guess. And I feel ordinary. Inside. But I know ordinary kids don’t make other ordinary kids run away screaming in playgrounds. I know ordinary kids don’t get stared at wherever they go.
Answer:
The excerpt is in the first-person perspective.
Explanation:
A first-person narrator uses first-person pronouns such as "I" and "me" and gives us his / her own perspective on things. The reader, therefore, only receives the information known and offered by the narrator. That means everything we get to know is biased, since it comes permeated by the narrator's feelings and opinions. Notice that the excerpt we are analyzing here uses first-person pronouns. This narrator is describing him/herself. We get a glimpse of the way he/she feels - "And I feel ordinary. Inside" - and thinks.
3. What attitude toward the minutemen does Emerson most clearly express in "Concord Hymn"?
A. He expresses regret.
B. He expresses bewilderment.
C. He expresses gratitude.
D. He expresses awe.
The Answer Is C. Got 100%. :)
The attitude toward the minutemen Emerson most clearly expresses in "Concord Hymn" is He expresses gratitude. Thus the correct option is C.
What is Concord Hymn?Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote poetry named as "Concord Hymn" about the minutemen's first fire in Concord, Massachusetts, in 1775.
The difficult period of American history when the first battles of the American Revolutionary War were fought between Americans and Britons is described in the song.
The song "Concord Hymn," which was composed in honor of the dedication of the war memorial in 1837, perfectly demonstrated Emerson's honesty in expressing his thanks to the troops who had fought for it.
Here, the narrator requests that the memorial be protected because it is a special remembrance. To recall and honor the heroes of a war that took place there, a stone monument was constructed.
Therefore, option C is appropriate.
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Guide Questions
“The Last Dog”
1.Before the story begins, Brock has wandered into many "ancient fictions”. Describe
these "ancient fictions”.
2. Describe the dome where Brock lives.
3. A proverb in Brock's world is “The key to survival is efficiency.” 4. Give an example
of something that happens in Brock's world that illustrates this proverb.
5. How was Brock raised as a child?
6. Which event takes place before Brock meets the dog?
7. What is the puppy doing when Brock first finds it? 8. Describe the people in Brock’s world as to their behavior and feelings. 9. How does meeting the dog change Brock? How does this meeting change both his personality and his future? 10. Why does Brock bite brog on the tail? 11. Find the meaning of the following words: foresighted, evasive, languishing, disembodied,foray,reproof, copious, posterity. 12. What is the last thing Brock does in the story?
Answer:
Can you provide the passage?
Explanation:
Which two details in the text reveal to the reader that Doctor Manette has a good reputation with members of the Tribunal?
Answer: "In the first frantic greetings lavished on himself as a noted sufferer under the overthrown system"
"But should, for his sake, be held blameless in safe custody"
Explanation: Edmentum confirmed
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In the play, the _____________of events is changed. But many of the characters are the same. Nonsense,
________________, and distortion of time and space are themes in the novels as well as the play. This is on Alice in Wonderland and Through The Looking Glass. Please make sure you understand the text before answering.
Answer:
its b she accepts the world around her is nonsense
Explanation:
i got it wrong and it showed me the answer
Please help
When
you are able to see through the subtle messages that are all around by becoming a
critical reader, you are then able to decide for yourself if you want to:
O contribute financially to the movement
O accept or reject these ideas.
O delete all of your social media accounts
Obecome a superhero
Answer:
*contribute financially to the movement
Explanation:
im not sure but it is my answer
Which persona does Dr. Jekyll decide to ultimately become? Why?
(CHapter 10 of The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde)
Answer: i don't know can u help angela and matthew with #9 and #10
Explanation:
What is the best description of Buck's character, based on this excerpt? 1. Buck is peaceful and content.
2. Buck is strong and aggressive.
3. Buck is instinctive and clever.
4. Buck is easygoing and mellow.
Answer:
c. Buck is instinctive and clever.
Explanation:
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How do you usually get people to agree with you?
With that I think 99.9% ppl will always agree and stand by you.
~Empress Arianna
What’s the mood of the poem icarus ?
Answer:
In the third stanza I felt like there was a sense of guilt within Icarus due to the fact that he felt foolish for falling into the water so he tries to make it up to himself by trying to create his own cheap wings. The tone of this poem was a hint of hopefulness (is that a word? Hehe) yet the tone is regretful
Read the excerpt from the interview with E.Y. (Yip) Harburg. We thought American business was the Rock of Gibraltar. We were the prosperous nation, and nothing could stop us now. A brownstone house was forever. You gave it to your kids and they put marble fronts on it. There was a feeling of continuity. If you made it, it was there forever. Suddenly the big dream exploded. The impact was unbelievable.
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Read the excerpt from the interview with E.Y. (Yip) Harburg.
We thought American business was the Rock of Gibraltar. We were the prosperous nation, and nothing could stop us now. A brownstone house was forever. You gave it to your kids and they put marble fronts on it. There was a feeling of continuity. If you made it, it was there forever. Suddenly the big dream exploded. The impact was unbelievable.
How do Harburg's words reflect the experience of many Americans during the Great Depression?
Like Harburg, many expected that they could maintain their possessions through the Depression.
Like Harburg, many were shocked by stock market collapse and ensuing Depression.
Like Harburg, many were grateful for the lessons they learned from the Depression.
Like Harburg, many made meticulous plans to prepare for the Depression.
Answer:
Like Harburg, many were shocked by stock market collapse and ensuing Depression.
Explanation:
The excerpt shown in the question above shows that Americans saw the United States as a country so prosperous and successful that it was constantly growing and had a path of success that would go on for years. This prosperity caused Americans to be extremely surprised by the arrival of the Great Depression, as they did not believe that an empire like the one the United States had established could be swept up in ashes and reached the brink of misery overnight, as happened with the collapse of the steel market.
The correct and suitable answer from the given passage is like Harburg, many were shocked by stock market collapse and ensuing Depression.
The main vision is to show that the country like America is growing so fast and developing in all the stages due to which the American were growing automatically and the job opportunity were so high and citizen were going too.
The Rock of Gibraltar was located on the sea shore of Great Britain , also consider the Property of United Kingdom and was the major connection between the sea business from other countries.
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After the bank clerk claims her coat, her transformation into a fox is swift. What
does the narrator say about how it feels to be inside the bank clerk's body?
Answer:
it shows that when bank clerk body was happy to have found here coat it tranformed to show happyness
Explanation:
read the excerpt below from A tree grows in Brooklyn and answer the question that follows
most children brought up in Brooklyn before the first world war remember Thanksgiving day there was a particular tenderness it was the day children went around Gaga muffin and slamming Gates wearing costumes topped off by a penny mask.
based on the excerpt what is the author's purpose in writing?
A. to inform
B. to persuade
C. to publish
D. to analyze
Answer:
In a way it’s all four but I would have to say the answer is C to publish
Explanation:
which theme best describes the text? History and evidence of things past can be interesting to study. History and evidence of things past can be interesting to study. Traveling to other places can be an exciting experience. Traveling to other places can be an exciting experience. Hard work and belief in oneself can be rewarding. Hard work and belief in oneself can be rewarding. Ordinary people can be heroes.
Answer:
This question is incomplete as you have not provided the text it refers to. Anyway, I will give you an explanation so that you can identify the answer for yourself.
Explanation:
In literature, the theme is the main idea that the literary work wants to convey. The theme include universal topics like love, hate, war, etc.
It is what you want to convey with the story told or what the author thinks about something that has always concerned all of humanity summarized in a few words or in a short sentence.